I'm looking for a sign
Running through the rain
I shiver to the bone
But I still can't shake the pain
I'm still looking for that sign
Rolling on the ground
What did I do to day
Well I can't remember now
I'm just trying to survive
The best way I know how
My heart just keeps on wanting
The one who doesn't want me now
So what if I go crazy
Going there keeps me alive
Living makes it clear
I'm just stuck right here
Trying to survive
If a broken heart could kill
I'd be long gone
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust by now
Six feet under a tombstone on the hill
Lying there alone in my new wooden home
Yea I'd be heaven bound
Or on my way down
If a broken heart could kill
Youve lost that feeling in your kiss
I'm only holding up the show
My god your face I'm going to miss
I see it's time to let you go
You don't dig loving me no more
We used to make it long and slow
I've cried so much my eyes are sore
I see it's time to let you go
It ain't no good if it don't feel good, real good
It still felt good to me
Well if you feel you should, it's understood
Go where you should be
Take everything that smells like you
Leave no reminders left to show
That at one time we were two
But now it's time to let you go
COMMENTS
..oh I do like this.
Very True & Extreme!
Well done!
What reason do you have to be so dismal my dear who broke your heart
There is a very wise pain slipping through the lines here..nicely written.
You are a good writer have you ever been published?
I.m a fire that doesn't warm, a leaf that doesn.t move in a storm.
A piece of charcoal that is clear, a next door neighbor that is never near.
I am a piece of ice that will burn, a wheel that will not turn.
An empty sky that's full of stars, a step away that's just too far.
I am you and I am me...the heavens and the sea.
I am in everyone...the moon and the sun, I am no-one.
I'm life that skipped the stage of birth.
An end to eternity
An instant running to infinity.
COMMENTS
This one made me stop in my tracks;
The hard brick facade with the wind-weathered cracks;
The poetry wounded exposing the scar;
The one step away that is one step too far.
Oh wow.
I really like this one!
It hits home.
You are such an excellent writer!
Very nice loved It.
Your work is wonderful. You getting them published soon.
This poem couldn't be any better, because its perfect the way it is.
COMMENTS
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RomaMarieNightwing
15:21 Sep 22 2009
Intensly Beautiful in Truth and Pain we have all felt!
Excellent!
darksurfer1969
01:53 Feb 19 2011
I've felt the pain of a broken heart before,hurts like hell too.Your poems Is very nice.
NellMorgan
23:19 Aug 25 2011
Simply stunning is 'If a Broken Heart could kill''. Intense and haunting, yet moving. Following your Journal now.