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If A Broken Heart Could Kill
01:10 Aug 24 2006
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I'm looking for a sign

Running through the rain

I shiver to the bone

But I still can't shake the pain

I'm still looking for that sign

Rolling on the ground

What did I do to day

Well I can't remember now

I'm just trying to survive

The best way I know how

My heart just keeps on wanting

The one who doesn't want me now

So what if I go crazy

Going there keeps me alive

Living makes it clear

I'm just stuck right here

Trying to survive

If a broken heart could kill

I'd be long gone

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust by now

Six feet under a tombstone on the hill

Lying there alone in my new wooden home

Yea I'd be heaven bound

Or on my way down

If a broken heart could kill

COMMENTS

RomaMarieNightwing
15:21 Sep 22 2009

Intensly Beautiful in Truth and Pain we have all felt!

Excellent!

darksurfer1969
01:53 Feb 19 2011

I've felt the pain of a broken heart before,hurts like hell too.Your poems Is very nice.

NellMorgan
23:19 Aug 25 2011

Simply stunning is 'If a Broken Heart could kill''. Intense and haunting, yet moving. Following your Journal now.

TIME TO LET YOU GO
18:23 Aug 22 2006
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Youve lost that feeling in your kiss

I'm only holding up the show

My god your face I'm going to miss

I see it's time to let you go

You don't dig loving me no more

We used to make it long and slow

I've cried so much my eyes are sore

I see it's time to let you go

It ain't no good if it don't feel good, real good

It still felt good to me

Well if you feel you should, it's understood

Go where you should be

Take everything that smells like you

Leave no reminders left to show

That at one time we were two

But now it's time to let you go

COMMENTS

Angelus
23:54 Jun 09 2008

..oh I do like this.

RomaMarieNightwing
15:34 Sep 22 2009

Very True & Extreme!

Well done!

CariousBlack
18:18 Feb 09 2011

What reason do you have to be so dismal my dear who broke your heart

LacyLashes
22:05 Feb 17 2011

There is a very wise pain slipping through the lines here..nicely written.

darksurfer1969
02:15 Feb 19 2011

You are a good writer have you ever been published?

No One
20:41 Aug 03 2006
Times Read: 1,079

I.m a fire that doesn't warm, a leaf that doesn.t move in a storm.

A piece of charcoal that is clear, a next door neighbor that is never near.

I am a piece of ice that will burn, a wheel that will not turn.

An empty sky that's full of stars, a step away that's just too far.

I am you and I am me...the heavens and the sea.

I am in everyone...the moon and the sun, I am no-one.

I'm life that skipped the stage of birth.

An end to eternity

An instant running to infinity.

COMMENTS

revblackveil65
05:57 Jul 10 2008

This one made me stop in my tracks;

The hard brick facade with the wind-weathered cracks;

The poetry wounded exposing the scar;

The one step away that is one step too far.